REVISIONS

Before we can approve your application, we need to request a few changes!

We understand that The Elder Scrolls is an enormous canon, but as your history is written, we're not quite able to follow what's actually happening to your character in practical terms and why, or how it impacts her. (E.g., ""Next she spied on the keeper of the Night Mother to see what he was up to. She could hear her. Meaning she was the Listener aka how contracts happen for."") Please revise it—and it's fine to just give us a higher level, plain-terms explanation of what her life has been like. ""She lived in Town A and left because of B, then killed some people because Q and joined Organization X, which does Y,"" is fine, without needing detail about each individual encounter or quest.

Your description of the canon is also somewhat difficult to follow, and is missing some key details necessary for us to understand your character. For instance, what is a Bosmer? Where do they fit into the world? How do they compare to DA canon elves? A more broad-strokes explanation of the world in general, plus greater detail about the aspects that are key to your character would help us evaluate her.

Please respond within 48 hours to let us know your application has been updated. (You may request an extension if necessary.) If you have any questions, let us know.