REVISIONS

Before we can approve your application, we need to request a few changes!

↠ Your personality section doesn't meet our minimum word count requirement. Please expand it to comply with the rule.

↠ While we don't have a minimum word count requirement for history sections, we'd like you to expand this as well to provide a fuller picture of Jane's upbringing, life, and adventures to date.

↠ In canon, are Jane's powers dependent on her connection with the demon, or are they powers that the demon has granted to her and which she now possesses independent of it? To put it more simply, the demon will not arrive in Thedas with Jane, and any connection she had with it will be severed and not available to draw on. Given that, will she still have powers? Please provide a clear answer in your Strengths & Weaknesses section.

↠ If the answer to the above is that yes, Jane would still have powers even if the demon doesn't come through the rift, then please expand on what those powers are and what their limits are. While we don't typically require a complete spell list, please keep in mind that powers you don't mention in your app for our approval can't later be used in game.

↠ When posting your revised application, please make sure to use the Rifter Application form we've provided on the Apps page.

Please respond within 48 hours to let us know your application has been updated. (You may request an extension if necessary.) If you have any questions, let us know.