Thank you for your interest! Unfortunately, at this time, we cannot accept your application to Fade Rift. Your Strengths & Weakness and Proposed Nerfs sections just don't provide enough information for us to accept at this time. We're still unclear on the full scope of Jane's abilities, as they currently appear to be theoretically limitless, and you mention that she is potentially overpowered. While we agree that failure is a fun part of storytelling and appreciate your willingness to explore that, for the sake of fairness and consistency we still need to impose limitations on her abilities overall rather than rely solely on players voluntarily using RNG in the game. We're also not sure that your proposed adaptation to Thedas makes sense given canon mechanics, and based on the information in your app, we're just not sure how it could be appropriately adapted. The Fade doesn't work the same way as the mental realm as you describe it, since characters can't (generally speaking) cross into it at will to communicate with spirits whenever they want, and time does continue to pass—so she couldn't mentally enter another plane to gamble with her spirit every time she needed power, especially during a fight. Jane's chances of possession and/or being seen as an abomination are also so high that, without more careful and comprehensive adaptation, it would be difficult to keep her playable in-game.
We like the character in general and think she would be a fun addition to the game, so we hope you'll reapply in a future rifter app round. In the meantime, you're welcome to post to the mod contact if you have any questions or other proposals for how to adapt or nerf her abilities; we're happy to discuss them with you in more depth in advance of the next Rifter app round to see if we can hammer out a workable solution.
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Thank you for your interest! Unfortunately, at this time, we cannot accept your application to Fade Rift. Your Strengths & Weakness and Proposed Nerfs sections just don't provide enough information for us to accept at this time. We're still unclear on the full scope of Jane's abilities, as they currently appear to be theoretically limitless, and you mention that she is potentially overpowered. While we agree that failure is a fun part of storytelling and appreciate your willingness to explore that, for the sake of fairness and consistency we still need to impose limitations on her abilities overall rather than rely solely on players voluntarily using RNG in the game. We're also not sure that your proposed adaptation to Thedas makes sense given canon mechanics, and based on the information in your app, we're just not sure how it could be appropriately adapted. The Fade doesn't work the same way as the mental realm as you describe it, since characters can't (generally speaking) cross into it at will to communicate with spirits whenever they want, and time does continue to pass—so she couldn't mentally enter another plane to gamble with her spirit every time she needed power, especially during a fight. Jane's chances of possession and/or being seen as an abomination are also so high that, without more careful and comprehensive adaptation, it would be difficult to keep her playable in-game.
We like the character in general and think she would be a fun addition to the game, so we hope you'll reapply in a future rifter app round. In the meantime, you're welcome to post to the mod contact if you have any questions or other proposals for how to adapt or nerf her abilities; we're happy to discuss them with you in more depth in advance of the next Rifter app round to see if we can hammer out a workable solution.