We know you're currently working through the canon, and there are the seeds of an interesting concept here! However, there are a few too many places in this app where key elements of Dragon Age canon seem to get muddled—and given the character's IC authority and prominence, the problems that could cause for other players in RP are more significant than, for example, if you were apping a farmer. At this time we need to decline the application. However, we encourage you to try again in a future app round! If you'd like some more specifics about the issues we spotted so you can keep them in mind next time, use our Mod Contact page and we'll be happy to discuss them with you.