REVISIONS

Before we can approve your application, we need to request a few changes!

↠ We try to "de-video-game" abilities in Fade Rift and to write about them in a realistic(ish) way that makes sense IC, for instance by making clear that despite how the video game depicts it, rogue characters from Dragon Age can't literally use a Stealth ability to turn invisible; they're just very good at sneaking. Along these same lines, rather than a list of game attacks we'd like you to explain Kain's capabilities and those of the armor and weapons you'd like him to arrive with. We're especially concerned with whether he has any superhuman and/or magical abilities, so please make sure to explain that.

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