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Fade Rift Mods ([personal profile] faderifting) wrote 2016-01-21 07:38 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

REVISIONS

Before we can approve your application, we need to request a few changes!
↠ Your history seems to be missing a little bit at the end. If this isn't unintentional, please provide an additional sentence or two to bridge what happens between joining Nathaniel and coming to the Inquisition.

As an additional note, Corypheus' personal interest in the Hawkes will be limited at most now that his bindings have been broken—he doesn't need them for anything anymore. Also, please make sure to watch your spelling of names and words from game lore! (Clarel, Marian, etc.)
Please respond within 48 hours to let us know your application has been updated. (You may request an extension if necessary.) If you have any questions, let us know.

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