QUESTIONS

Before we can approve your application, we have some questions! You do not need to revise your app. Respond to this comment with your answers.

↠ Regarding the red lyrium, we want to make sure that the events you described only occured recently (e.g. after the events of DA2).

↠ Additionally, we need to ask you to make the effect of the shard less extreme and/or find a way other than mere proximity to the shard to create the events you mention. We see people exposed to red lyrium without the effects immediately becoming extreme. So we'd ask that instead of just having the presence of a shard instantly turn Kuttner murderous and send a whole ship full of people abomination-level mad, that maybe Kuttner cut himself on the shard or those experiments involved introducing lyrium into the food or water--something beyond mere exposure. That could more plausibly produce the result you've described.

We'd also like to clarify that the lyrium itself shouldn't have weakened the veil so much in such a short period of time that spirits were called forth, though if mages were affected by it they could have done so.

The question is: are you okay with those changes?

↠ Unrelated to the above, can you also please describe the level of functionality you have in mind for Alejandro's current prosthetic?

Please respond within 48 hours. (You can request an extension, but please note that you can answer these questions as casually as you want-- don't stress about it or worry over phrasing!) If you have any questions, let us know.