REVISIONS

Before we can approve your application, we need to request a few changes!

↠ Your personality section is only 95 words, and we require a minimum of 300. Please resubmit an application that complies with our rules.

↠ Additionally, as you make those revisions, we'd like to request that something--money seems like the easiest route--justify Zapp's proximity to Gaspard. Especially in background canon like The Masked Empire, Gaspard is only a thug in comparison to someone like Celene; compared to everyone else he's charming and intelligent and plays the Game pretty well, and it's important to us for plot reasons that he not be made out explicitly or by implication to be a total idiot or someone who would necessarily endorse all of Zapp's behavior/antics.

↠ We require AU'd characters to have names that match their settings. Zapp is fine as a nickname, and you could either change his name to something Orlesian-y (Brannigéne?) or make his father's side of the family wealthy Marcher nobility.

↠ We don't generally allow people to NPC playable characters in-game. Zapp is welcome to have a manservant with whom he maintains that dynamic, but not Kif specifically so that if someone were to app Kif in the future, they would be free to do so without adhering to your AU. This isn't something you need to change in your app, just somehting to be aware of if castmates show up.

Please respond within 48 hours to let us know your application has been updated. (You may request an extension if necessary.) If you have any questions, let us know.