Revisions made--I do hope it's alright that I used your suggested surname, as is? It was perfect.
I've tweaked his History section to reflect his adjusted ties to Gaspard (money), expanded his personality to be a little less brief, and given him a truly dreadful name to avoid while keeping his nickname.
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I've tweaked his History section to reflect his adjusted ties to Gaspard (money), expanded his personality to be a little less brief, and given him a truly dreadful name to avoid while keeping his nickname.